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When Prospecting, Be Real

I received an unsolicited email this morning from a niche job board that is really lame.  The remarkable offer:

I spoke with my Manager specifically about your company.  I asked him to help me put together a cost effective trial package that would need to give you a good feel for how effective our service can be.

I was able to create a private promotion that my Manager has authorized until the end of February.

Since this is a private special, it is not available online. If you want to take advantage of it, you must call me.

And of course the offer appears to be a 70% discount.  Please.  The fact that “Manager” is capitalized is entertaining in itself.  However, the entire prospecting message screams “delete me.”

I always appreciate prospecting approaches that are real, honest and straight-forward.  Approaches like this one have far too much of a used car sales approach to be considered valuable.

UPDATE:  I just received the exact same email for one of our other sites.  Perhaps this sales rep and Manager are quite the proficient team.  Either that or it is spam.

Candidate Requirements

Might be a good idea to leave this bit of data out of the cover email:

Position must be daytime hours and reachable BY THE BUS SYSTEM. I am without a vehicle and License at this time, this is only temporary until I pay a fine.