Base on this subject line, I don’t think this person is lacking confidence:

The god of office administration soon to be in Twin Cities!

And here is an objective to avoid:

My expirience and work ethic make me a great canidate for any opening you may have. I am looking for an opportunity that is full time with benefits.

And a subject line to avoid:

John Doe looking for work

This one almost hurts:

Help change my life. I’ve been stuck in a rut for a few years . . . I need to get a jolt so I can start to live again. Looking for any opportunity to get out.

And from the graphic design world (I must confess, I slightly enjoyed this one):

There you are! I was wondering how long it would take for you to find me! Well, now that you’re here, we can start.

I’m your new graphic designer.

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