{"id":1044,"date":"2007-06-30T13:37:00","date_gmt":"2007-06-30T18:37:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/selectmetrix.com\/blogs\/2007\/06\/lazy-ad-writing\/"},"modified":"2007-06-30T13:37:01","modified_gmt":"2007-06-30T18:37:01","slug":"lazy-ad-writing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/selectmetrix.com\/blogs\/2007\/06\/lazy-ad-writing\/","title":{"rendered":"Lazy Ad Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>First let me say, I read through a business development job ad today that was fairly well-written.&nbsp; The ad did use many second person questions &#8211; Do you enjoy closing deals&#8230;?&nbsp; I&#8217;m not a huge fan of that approach, but I suspect it engages the readers at some level.<\/p>\n<p>The part I wanted to call out was towards the end of the ad when the author calls out the requirements for this position:<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p>To be a successful candidate for the BDM position, you should: <\/p>\n<p>\u00b7 Hold a Bachelor\u20ac\u2122s Degree, preferably in Packaging <\/p>\n<p>\u00b7 Have 8 years sales-related packaging experience<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p>First, the B.A. degree should be a preference and not a requirement.&nbsp; I googled the &#8220;Packaging&#8221; degree and it appears to be related to Packaging Design.&nbsp; If that is crucial to successfully selling in this market, fine (I personally don&#8217;t know).&nbsp; However, I am of the conviction that sales cannot be taught in school.&nbsp; Successful salespeople have a blend of abilities that have been refined by sales experiences. <\/p>\n<p>Second, &#8220;Have 8 years&#8230;&#8221; is sloppy.&nbsp; 8?&nbsp; Not 7, not 9?&nbsp; The better form would be &#8220;Have a minimum of 8 years&#8230;.&#8221;&nbsp; Still, I would say this experience is desirable but not required. <\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve never understood how companies come to the conclusion of how many years is ideal.&nbsp; What if the candidate has 8 years of industry experience but it was basically the first year repeated 8 times?&nbsp; What if another candidate has only 5 years of industry experience but it was 5 years of unique growth and development?&nbsp; This ad&#8217;s requirement would discourage or eliminate the candidate who actually had better experience as opposed to tenure. <\/p>\n<p>We <em>never<\/em> use the minimum years&#8217; experience requirement in our ads.&nbsp; I do not recommend&nbsp;that you use it in your ads&nbsp;either.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>First let me say, I read through a business development job ad today that was fairly well-written.&nbsp; The ad did use many second person questions &#8211; Do you enjoy closing deals&#8230;?&nbsp; I&#8217;m not a huge fan of that approach, but I suspect it engages the readers at some level. The part I wanted to call out was towards the end of the ad when the author calls out the requirements for this position: To be a successful candidate for the BDM position, you should: \u00b7 Hold a Bachelor\u20ac\u2122s Degree, preferably in Packaging \u00b7 Have 8 years sales-related packaging experience First, the B.A. degree should be a preference and not a&hellip; <a class=\"read-more\" href=\"http:\/\/selectmetrix.com\/blogs\/2007\/06\/lazy-ad-writing\/\">Read More<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"bgseo_title":"","bgseo_description":"","bgseo_robots_index":"","bgseo_robots_follow":"","jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[26,2,16],"tags":[],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p5Oho-gQ","jetpack-related-posts":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/selectmetrix.com\/blogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1044"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/selectmetrix.com\/blogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/selectmetrix.com\/blogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/selectmetrix.com\/blogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/selectmetrix.com\/blogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1044"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"http:\/\/selectmetrix.com\/blogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1044\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/selectmetrix.com\/blogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1044"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/selectmetrix.com\/blogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1044"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/selectmetrix.com\/blogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1044"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}<!-- WP Super Cache is installed but broken. 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